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Sunday, March 1, 2015

Journeymage cover, version 1

What do y'all think?




28 comments:

  1. The shapes / elements, like it. The over-sharpening (?), awful.

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  2. Not sure about the white border and I don't like the over-sharpening.
    I would like to see it in maybe a darker shade or blue or maybe a two toned blue.

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    1. I'll play around with it. I'm shooting for the "trust me, you won't mind spending that much on a bunch of electrons!" effect.

      The white border is an artifact of the blog, not on the original image.

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  3. the image needs to be less sharp. Also, fog.

    PS I REALLY WANT TO READ THIS

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    1. Fog? In early summer? In the wild highlands of the Alshari Wilderlands?

      PS I REALLY WANT YOU TO READ THIS. Really. It's been a blast to write, part travelogue, part character study, part feel-good adventure. Also, some intriguing new magic. And what happens when you start getting "funned out" at the worst possible time.

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  4. Book 7?! What have I missed?! Also it seems a bit... bright

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  5. Book 7?! What have I missed?! Also it seems a bit... bright

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    1. You missed the fact that I was a liberal arts major and can't count. I accidentally figured Hawkmaiden into the sequence, when it's actually Book 1 of its own series. It gets confusing when you're putting them out as rapidly as I am, and you're trying to do as many things at once as I am.

      Good catch, and thanks.

      That would have been awkward. I'll fix it in the revision. See, this is why I do these things.

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  6. Looks good but the green is too prominent....The tower needs to hold the focus more.

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  7. Like the cover however wouldn't you rather show a picture of the progression of sevendor?? I know I would to see if what I have head reflects your vison as well

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  8. I like the cover, just needs that trademark green light in the window, also I would love to see some pics of sevendor

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  9. Cover reminds me of Scottish Highlands Castle Leoch

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  10. I'll take it coverless if it means I can get it within a week. Muahahah. I'm jonsin for mah fix!

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  11. My eyes are drawn to the ground and the wall. Even though it seems like the tower should be the focus it isn't at least to me. Defiantly kind of sharp and bright.

    Futhermore is this book viewpoint on Min or his apprentices? Can't remember if that was mentioned somewhere or not.

    Anyway guess I should start my reread of the series soon. Since I like to reread all the books + side stories before a new book is released. Its getting longer now to do it. And my enjoyment of the books still haven't gone down.

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    1. I too feel that the tower is too high up in the image. I feel like it should come down so that the base of the tower rests at ~1/3 of the way up rather than 1/2. However, I don't know if this can be adjusted.

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  12. Do you have a rough idea when the book will be out terry ?

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  13. I rather like it... but still; now you're just teasing us with that cover and making us even more impatient for a release date!

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  14. All right, all right. Within the next two weeks, more than likely.

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    1. You sir have made my jaw drop! I'm amazed how quickly this is coming out.

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  15. Needs a green mage light. Keeping with tradition ....

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  16. I'm not an art expert but I like it.

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