It's still in beta, but I replaced two repeated chapters (12 and 13) and handled a couple of glaring errors.
Let me know what you think. This post CAN contain spoilers.
Update: More updates to come. Early readers, please feel free to share any corrections or continuity issues with me here, or (if you prefer) email me at firstname.lastname@example.org. (UPDATE ON UPDATE: Just published the third set of corrections, so far).
There are very good reasons why I released it when I did, in this condition, and I'll explore some of them in a post next week. Right now I just want to finish the "sanding". If you prefer a better-edited version, then I urge you to wait until August 1st when the final edit will be done and published.
The feedback on the story is helpful, though. Let me know what you think. And I'll answer a few questions about your concerns as we go.
Thanks for your patience. All will be made clear in time.
(That's what a good wizard would say.)